I love this type of activity and it can easily be set up for success with a few simple steps by a teacher.
Students simply listen to the original commercial and then are "challenged" to rewrite it in a creative way. Then, play the video without the original audio and have them perform their own version.
I made this by editing the video in the videopad editor (get here) and removing the sound, adding the subtitles and creating 2 files which I merged together. Get the separate videos for download and use HERE.
Of course, see our Using Commercials In The Classroom ebook for lots of great ideas.
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